Hunter version 2

I really like what you're doing with the silhouettes of the trees in the BG - the green to yellow works really well in providing a creatively strong sense of depth and space. I think, however, the cast shadows the leaves make on her body need a lil tweaking - at the moment it seems like they're just painted on her skin. Perhaps play with the opacity of the shadows a little more? If, ignoring the rest of the suggestions in my critique, this is the one aspect that I'd like to see an edit on.

Your first version of the Hunter had a softer 'painted' look - as my own personal preference, I'd like to see a bit more of that in the illustration of the character. However, since the piece, for the most part, uses a more 'cel-shaded' look, it's probably best kept that way anyway for an overall cohesive work. It might work in your favor to add some secondary light here and there on the Hunter character, and perhaps a touch more darker shadow on the areas that are covered from the atmospheric light source.

Overall, a very solid piece. Fav'd.